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Wow, the art in your game is so pretty! Everything fits together super well, the thumbnail alone already really caught my attention, the rock crumbling animation is cool, the background looks gorgeous and the character design and drawings are all beautiful too. Really well done on that front! It's also cool that you came up with this whole story but I think I'd have preferred if it wasn't all front loaded in a wall of text and instead had some kind of back and forth with gameplay sections or was embedded in a cutscene to make it more engaging.

Gameplay could have used some more variation and depth as it got old pretty quickly. But it's basically fine. One interesting thing about it is the arrow travel time and that you have to aim ahead of the moving obstacles so that the arrow hits them where they will be. I'd like it a bit more if the difficulty ramped up over time I think. Or if there was a way to win at some point.