Spoilers follow:
Theme: Expansion of unreality into our reality? (Undercut in that it was a dream).
Story: The real spaghetti wasn't the plate, but the tendrils of corruption twisting the area... but it was a dream.
Presentation: I liked the modification of the red screen for a (mostly) single act work, but no music nor sfx at all felt awry.
Creativity: it gave me Cool and New Webcomic Vibes, which is a bit plus honestly. I was amused at your take on calling the "mywolf" an inherently flat concept, given it lacked the dimensionality "you" had. It would have been fun to explore that conceit further in your horror satire.
Overall thoughts: You're a homestuck fan, aren't you? or at least a hussie fan? The red miles, the corruption of CanWC, Zhen waking up to a pot at the start of Psychocolonials? or is that just me. Am i the only one drawing those connections.
Didn't appreciate the dream break nor the filler words of "again and again" or whatever it was. I think you could have achieved something other than dream. You were doing so well with the conceit of the 2d and 3d dimensionality.