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Okay, finally time to look at this.

This VN is heavily based off of an Japanese-RPG so that’s why a lot of things are capitalized when in normal literature they shouldn’t be.

I do agree that bechamel should be lowercase. I swore that the Mother Sauces get capitalized.

Government-distributed should be lowercase.

Medium-Small should be lowercase too.

Everything else, I feel like is just RPG This-Is-Important-So-Capitalize-It, speak.

Thank you for reporting these. I will change those that I agree with you on in July.

No worries!  I'm personally not a stickler on grammer, I just know some people can be!  I can certainly understand your decision.

It was just a minor observation in passing, so when you asked for clarification, I just re-read through the beginning for examples.  I expounded more on that part because it's something that for me personally that was confusing, and that I was reprimanded for once at my old job.  I don't think you'll have veterans calling up your boss wanting you to get fired over it! (long story)

I also didn't go through past the first screen mentioning the catacombs, since I was just wanting to give a few examples, so there may be other examples later in the game, since I wasn't trying to beat you in the head with it.

I hope it didn't come across as nitpicking or critical; I just tried to mention things in my review that other people haven't already said. ; ) 

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Don’t worry, you’re fine dude. I understand.