At the end after we met your master, where it said that he smacked our head with something, there's an error just after the part that basically says since the sun is setting, we are ready to hit the hay. The only criticism I have is the lack of a page that states 'hey this is the end of the demo.' I thought something went wrong on your end, like something in thw code was typed in wrong. I wouldn't have know that was the end of the demo if I didn't went to the comments. Other than that I did like what I had read though.