Very good, a few typos, a beta would be a good pickup if you're going to continue this. The premise is very interesting and while the tone/genre shift might take some people off guard I liked it. Mikkel's struggles were heartbreaking and it while I genuinely think it takes more than one interaction or person to pull someone out of that kind of spiral it does show how powerful and affecting one interaction can be and that's a good message.
Very curious to see where it goes from here.