An interesting read to say the least, Blazing Passion definitely succeeded in making an unexpectedly dark story.
I think, at least in my opinion, this story could have benefitted from a bit more time in the oven. The entire first half doesn't serve any purpose other than introducing us to Arthur, and some characters narratively can be completely taken out of the story and it doesn't affect it at all. The presentation could have also used a little bit of polish, it does kind of give off the vibe of "choosing the first picture that shows up when I google 'outside park'".
Despite this, it's a very engaging read, and I was definitely on the edge of my seat the whole time! Props to the team for this one :]