The story was great, I love how you tell us just enough knowing we're smart enough to use context clues to figure out whats happening. Submitting your game to a game jam is a really good way to get the word out about it but so far it isn't really a My Wolf story so the only category id dock points from would be theme.
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Gotta say that writing is not my best skill, so I compensate for it with visual cues. I'm glad I could pull it off pretty well to tell the story.
Regarding the theme, this year it's more into the word "expanding" rather than just the My Wolf trope. The jam doesn't even require you to have the wolf as a love interest, just being a major character is enough. Admittedly, I couldn't put a punching emphasis that the story I wanted to tell was expanding the web of fates, but still, I'm glad to know lots of people like the game as a whole.