Just read, here are a few thoughts I had:
- I like the criminal underbelly vibe you set up. Very much a mix of Spire and Elysium. I kept wondering how the people of Tantalus had gotten into such dire straights.
- I'm glad that you included a map and the descriptions of the districts. I wish you had a bit more time for the illustrating of the map! BUT your districts set tone very nicely.
- The d4 / d6 thing is pretty interesting... I am curious how it will play....
- Pg 14-15 layout issue with the Crit Wounds.
- YOUR WOUND TABLES ARE GREAT! Jeez you packed a ton in there. As well with the insanity one.
- I love when designers use Action Points!
- At first glance, the Firearm distance table confused me so much. I thought I would need a ruler. Then I realized what was going on. Maybe just preface how to read this table.
- I really wanted a sample session!
All in all, well done! Just give us more setting! Cause the rules are 90% there.