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Just read, here are a few thoughts I had:

  • I like the criminal underbelly vibe you set up. Very much a mix of Spire and Elysium. I kept wondering how the people of Tantalus had gotten into such dire straights.
  • I'm glad that you included a map and the descriptions of the districts. I wish you had a bit more time for the illustrating of the map! BUT your districts set tone very nicely.
  • The d4 / d6 thing is pretty interesting... I am curious how it will play....
  • Pg 14-15 layout issue with the Crit Wounds.
  • YOUR WOUND TABLES ARE GREAT! Jeez you packed a ton in there. As well with the insanity one.
  • I love when designers use Action Points!
  • At first glance, the Firearm distance table confused me so much. I thought I would need a ruler. Then I realized what was going on. Maybe just preface how to read this table.
  • I really wanted a sample session!

All in all, well done! Just give us more setting! Cause the rules are 90% there.

Thank you for the great critique! We knew very well that our map was very lacking, but our illustrator wasn't available in those last hours, so Calle had to make it himself haha. We will of course continue to develop TSOTC, so look out for the next version and we promise there will be lots and lots of stories to tell and discover in the Shadow!