I played on phone, which, nice you included that! In general I think there was too much open space without any clear goal so I don’t know if I saw the whole game. But I liked the floating part and doors. I think it could have benefitted from being more of a puzzle game, right now I just aimlessly walked about. The storytelling could have been more audiovisual: At one point you say there is something watching. Could have made a sound and a visual instead to foreshadow the eyes that appear later. All in all i think it is a solid start. For future jams I think you should focus on limiting the scope and polishing what you have. There were a lot of mechanics jammed into this one which you could have explored more:)