This entry surprised me with a lot of great moments. I struggle with anything to be critical of!
The only two things that seemed a bit out of place was the fox being too understanding at the end of the diner scene when the dragon said his phone was unavailable and that he was still going on the hiking trip. Given her character, there would at least be a stern "we'll discuss this later" when she was leaving.
The other was the "I love you" scene during stargazing when it was just established how the wolf knew about but did not understand emotions. Because all his memories were based on the dragons' experiences, he also understood how the dragon felt about his love with the otter being one-sided since it had just been discussed.
Again, that's just me trying to find something, because I greatly enjoyed the story regardless!