This is one of the best entries in the Jam. In describing Cockhole’s 9:22 I used the term “impeccable simplicity”, and I feel the same way about this one. Donuts Holes is, ironically, pretty free of fat, making for a straight story that even has room for some choices and an alternate path. There’s not much that could have been added to improve this one, but this time, that’s a compliment.
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Probably the only thing I'd liked to have added would have been slightly more distinct dialogue for the endings to distinguish a bit for players who made some of the right choices but not all of them, instead of only two endings. The month got away from us though, and it was better to have two fully finished paths.