Aw, didn't want it to end so soon! At least it didn't end on a major cliff hanger like I was suspecting it was going to after the booze smuggling.
I also do like that even though there is a serious and growing story happening that it's not all drama and action all of the time. That's something that, personally, has been kind of wearing on me with a few other titles. They're still great titles, but man... some fluff and time with characters outside the drama would be nice.
The humor in this is great as well, especially the bits that aren't necessarily meant to be jokes. The bit where Jace is given a hard time about his clothes being torn a bit when his shirt was clipping through his top was great.
Can't wait to see how things progress, hope things go by smoothly for you!
Some minor typos I noticed:
While in class MC responds to Sarah with "Oh yeah, staring at me where are you?" instead of "Oh yeah, staring at me were you?"
Granted thanks to the way Mrs May decided to sit, at least the view was a little more stimuilating. -> Should be stimulating
When Chloe and MC are in the basement at the start of Episode 2 (Wait a minuet) -> should be minute
Mina can read your memoires -> should be memories
You want me to get rid of that human you mistakenly bound yourself too.-> too should be to
When MC's mom says it was a surprise MC thinks "(For me too Lia... For me too...)" should be mom instead of Lia
When Tamara says "Rather thanks letting it flow" should be than