For some reason, I couldn't manage to open the PsychoSpiralBeast .exe file to read it, so I will read and rate this VN in the meanwhile. 13th entry I will read and rate, here we go!
This is the first VN I read that uses the Tasmanian devil sprite.
Edit 1: OMG, ROBLOX FLOOD ESCAPE MUSIC.
Edit 2: OMG ECHO MUSIC.
Edit 3: Ok. I have finished reading this VN. Here are my thoughts.
I liked the story you went for. It reminds me of Squid Game a bit. It is one of those VN's in which the plot can be just as interesting as the characters, if not more.
The fact custom sprites were made for this VN is amazing. It provides the game with its own unique vibe. The visual component of presentation was decent; however, the VN could use some modifications in sound design (for example, music representing tension drags on for too long and loses its effect).
As some comment has stated, I am not sure about how you implemented the theme. If I had to make a guess, I'd say it is expansion of greed.
That's what I think of this VN. Thanks for the experience (and the accidental Roblox Flood Escape reference).