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Finished. It took like a week for me to finally set aside time to finish, but it was pretty good, say, a 7 or 8 out of 10. Only thing I'd say that needs improving is pacing, especially in the first chapter, and the length of the chapters themselves (They can just feel overly short is all). Besides that, I would say this is one of the best nsfw games I've played. In a ranking of all the nsfw games, I'd rank it in 6th place, between Maeve's Academy and World Tamer, leaning closer to the latter. I would probably rank it a bit higher if it had more time to develop characters (Which I already love them all), as I am left simply wanting to see more of them. That might move it up a tier, but the top 4 are my all-time favorites, and I'm doubt full anyone going to take one of their places (They'll just keep fighting amongst themselves, trying to out do Corrupted Kingdoms, which very well might never happen). Sorry for all the uncertainty, I'm a very indecisive person. I'm doubtful that Stork will see this, but might as well leave this here just in case. 

P.S– There are A LOT of grammatical errors, which I am not going to hold against the game's over all ranking and score, as almost every nsfw game has the same problem.

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Thanks a lot for the very complete critic, I'm in a very slow part of development.

And EVERY comment is read, all of them.

I will take in account everything said here for the future of the game and the potential rework of chapter 1, as I agree that it's WAY too fast and that it lacks in proper development.

I am very humbled to have my work placed that high, thanks again for your word of advice and I wish you a fine day / night depending on where you're located!

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It's no problem, I just enjoy critiquing things for some reason. In all honesty, though, I'm a bit embarrassed you actually saw it. Either way, keep up the good work; you've been doing a wonderful job thus far, and I believe that you very much can continue doing so and more. I've been having a great time recently, and hope that you are as well!