Usually I move on but theres times i see potential in games and I have to point out a thing or two. You have a talent, no lie about that. But a red flag I have is there's always an involvement of the LGBT through dialogue and have the MC say what you as the dev feels like saying. the lesbians, the gays, the trans...For your next game, I suggest you keep all things vanilla but have options for those who prefer other kinks. sounds easy? I know, we all have our kinks. and that is exactly why I am asking for an alternative path to everything.
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Thank you.
You actually have a choice at the very beginning when MC can start acting a bit homophobic even. So you basically have three options: into trans, don't care about it, hate it. It might not be too obvious tho. Just choose to run away when you first see Daisy. But later after one event with Daisy he kind of changes his mind. It's all about developing Daisy's character and adding depth to her while still delivering an important message. Could I have done without it? Sure. But I decided to bring this up for all paths coz I believe it's important. But you won't get much content or dialogues about this topic unless there is Daisy involved somehow. And unless you are on her path, there's almost no content with her whatsoever.
But I'm not trying to make excuses here:) Just saying that you have options and you form your own kinks. Can even be homophobic if you want to.
thanks for the feedback. and what about the lesbian content? A threesome doesn't need to involve homo acts. if possible, please have the option to only have the girls focus on MC. like in "Away from home". again, it's about making everyone happy in this department. so don't remove the content, just make alt paths. ps. i love your work so far❤