This one is a slow burner. It took me some time but I didn't want it to end.
The writing is overall great but the quality fluctuate inside the game : I guess it's hard to keep the same quality when you have so little time and a story this long. If the two main characters are well established, other characters struggle to find their own voices.
But all of this is nitpicking. I loved this one and I hope its creator will make a lot more in the future ! Keep on with the good writing !