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hey sorry late reply but thanks for the critism! At the time I was posting this thread I was basically just writing down whatever came to mind without thinking much of it. But reading your reply actually made it clear to me that I was basically dropping a game prompt rather than an actual plot --;

It's been awhile since I posted it and my motivation to write has been pretty down, but I hope if I manage to write it out properly you can give some feedback to it.

Thanks again :)

Oh hey, I didn't mean my post as a criticism exactly, but I just meant that I felt like you only told the beginning of the story, and with my post I was just trying to inspire you to extend the idea, if you wanted to, or if you had more details in mind that you didn't say in the OP.