It's cute and fun with a bonus tied to other wacky's work that is pretty cool at the end. Just like your other works the art style of the sprites are really charming to me.
The presentation is cool, mostly classic renpy stuff and it throws away some illustration at you too, it's dynamic enough to keep being visually stimulating and we shall not forget the wavy arm. The only real critique I could really tell about the story is that although there is a clear story structure sometimes the dialogues drag on a bit. I liked the small twist at the end too, as I feel it can be very relatable to a lot of people.
A really good use of the theme and some moments are really funny. Sloth girl only and best girl.