Has some spoiler in it be warned if you read :
So far it's the entry that made me laugh the most. I also discovered who was the culprit immediatly, probably because i'm way too strong and didn't just choose the least suspicious character on the grounds that it would be him.
A bit on the negative : The presentation is really jarring to me. most of the chosen bg makes little to no sense with the characters on screen and the character scale are all other the place. I can understand wanting to make characters appear differently, but that's not exactly how it works, using the scale too much makes one character hand almost as big as another character's head, which looks disturbing.
It would have been great to have at least some music management in there, I think it's an important part of any vn that should be adressed.
Other than that the writing and pacing was very enjoyable, I like the banter and the "no apologies" writting style, especially with the detective character. I liked it!