OwO. What's this? Another VN to read and rate? My 14th of this jam? Heck yeah! There we go!
Ok I have just finished reading this VN. Here are my thoughts.
It was a hybrid between a light-hearted slice-of-life and a full blown satire entry. It tells a story at the same time it comes up with genre-conscious humor (the choice you get while you are on your seat is an example of this). It's like Password (in its slice-of-life aspect) but written by Badminton Ace's author (who is readthisifyouarehomo btw). However, it's genre uncertainity makes some things unclear, like the romance/dating for example. If you read this as a comedy slice-of-life, it's too rushed, but if you consider this to be a parody of fvn dating sims, it's fine.
The fact you used custom sprites is nice, even though they are quite simple and sometimes look strange (for example, when they laugh), yet I understand we were only given one month to do this, so it's ok. You also put choices in the vn, props for the effort.
Now, there are some negative aspects of this VN. First (kind of) is the blank-slate-ness of the MC, which is not bad per se but feels not so properly implemented. Second, the lack of sound. Third, the characters' oddly developing relationships (romance appears too quickly and kind of out of the blue, yet if you read this as a parody vn it makes sense). Bonus, the fact conversations with Lupus or True are the same regardless of the week you start meeting them.
I saw the game archives and found the Omega wolf in a prison uniform lol.
These are my thoughts on this VN. Thanks for the experience!