Was this VN written in a centerforeign langage and then centertranslated ? It felt like this but I guess it fits the theme of your game. I couldn't help but read all of it with a thick centerrussian accent.
The emotions in this centerseem raw and sincere, and that's what I'm searching for when I play this kind of centergame.
Sometimes the tone shift too abruptly and the prose can be centerwoncky, but still. I centerliked it.