Me sees VN! Me's 16th Vn me will read and rate from this jam!
Edit 1: Ok, I have just read and rated this entry. Here are my thoughts.
First of all, I must highlight the fact you included poetry segments in the VN, a quite witty feature. However, to be honest the prose felt rough, which made the ideas and images conveyed in the poem sections hard to understand.
Every sprite and background is custom made. For a visual novel made entirely by a single person (minus the music), it's nice. As other comments below pointed out though, characters sort of get lost in the bright backgrounds.
The main negative aspect of this story is that it spends more time describing what the main character is doing than showing us the actual interactions between the wolf and the binturong or the main conflict which is the social animosity towards the wolf's city incorporation to another one. The poetry is there, sure, but the way it's been put up makes it insufficient to effectively tell the story.
These are my thoughts on this VN so far. Thanks for the experience! (Also, props for including a binturong in your VN, those are pretty rare and only you and the Three Aces author included one in your submissions).