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The beginning has me hooked. Special mention to the coding and music. It really add to the atmosphere.


Spoiler for first Farah appearance Wish MC could cry out that it was Parim tea set as soon as Farah broke the tea cup. Because one of mine would instinctively said it and then go to gather all of the pieces. While I could see another flatly/angrily declare it as they put away the rest to make sure Farah can't touch it. Or more stern/Dignified MC trying (and maybe falling) very hard to stay calm and tell Farah that this tea cup belonged to Parim and how it was made.

But of course I understand if Farah breaking it is necessary for plot reasons.

I think another option when trying to calm yourself down that be neat. MC asking themselves what would Parim do. Could end up working and increase dignified, gentle, straightforward stat maybe ? Or backfire as MC cry or get angry alternatively. Just an idea that seem appropriate.

I hope that if the tea set must be broken. That later we can repair it with gold with Farah helping. And then maybe put it on Parim tomb as a gift. Or better. MC take Farah with her to Parim tomb as well as the repaired tea set. So Farah can apologize and present it. And after both drink tea and talk with each other as well as Parim and the rest of their siblings.

Thanks so much for reading and thanks for your suggestions! I’ll keep them in mind. :) 💖

No problem ! I can’t wait to see where this goes. I checked the tumblr. And as someone on the aroace spectrum. Can I say how refreshing it is to have a world so accepting of us. Many IF creator do include us. (Some better then other unfortunately) But this time. Your world really give me the feeling that we don’t just exist. We are integrated into the world. And an inherent part of it. Seriously the worldbuilding is so queer that it made me think about why more writers didn’t think about veering away from the more typical idea we have of marriage in fantasy/historical WIP.

So I’m following this very closely !

I'm glad to hear that! ❤️💕I'm also aspec so time to whip out the split attraction model babeyyyy