A good story with relatable themes.
The music fits well and the backgrounds give a provide a nice window into the setting. And I did not expect the custom CGs! Those were a pleasant surprise.
The writing is pretty good. There are some tender moments where I really felt for the characters in the scene. That said, I think that the emotional beats just barely missed the mark.
I actually started to become a little frustrated because the world was there, and the tension between the characters was building beautifully, and then there would be a weird phrase or a tonal shift that would take me out of the moment.
All of that said, this turned out to be fun read. I'll definitely look out for more work from you all in the future.