I seriously love the presentation of this VN, the standout moment for me was seeing the reflection of Asher's face on the blank, shaking phone. So cool!!
The writing is also really solid, and the characters are likeable throughout the read. The ending (at least the bad one that I read) does seem to come a little out of nowhere, and with no real explanation as to... what the hell is going on qwq but I don't think that's such a bad thing. Overall, an enjoyable read, especially impressive for a debut. Congrats!! <3