This is another victim of ambition. There’s way too much the developer wanted to do and it all just doesn’t fit a month-long Game Jam. Multiple choices, apparently many paths, this was never going to be finished properly at the end of a single month. As to what is there, the prose is just very basic with a couple of semantic and grammatical errors. The way one of the characters reacted to the possibility of the MC being a trans person kinda rubbed me the wrong way (the whole situation did, actually, but I think, in part, it’s the intended reaction).