First, Nice Job on the intro having a GT 720 while making this is ghadly XD. But some images aren't translated (Very minor) like the Eviction notice the paper isn't translated but you Subtitled it which is nice and I Like it. But dying to a blast radius is kinda Pathetic but understandable also Very Great Job for introducing the MC and the characters. Also, few may not notice it but thanks for implementing a delete save not many use it nowadays. And YES FINALLY, A real Character development not just time skip and stuff an Actual Character development. I also like what you going with this A modern world with a touch of fantasy and Future is always a Chef's kiss if the author knows the Flow(if you know what I mean hehe).
Totally, 9.8/10
(.2 deduction for some Untranslated stuff but no worries)
I really Enjoyed reading this.
See you on the next Update. ^^