That is a HELL of an opening line tbh
And the rest of the VN continues to deliver! I really loved the prose, it was a really appropriately heavy for the subject matter. I really loved the atmosphere you were able to capture with royalty-free images and provided sprites.
I would have loved to see Jo's reactions or have her on-screen, but I understand the limitations of the jam. I think it was a good entry within the confines!