Here's my playthrough of your game Sigma!
Overall it was okay. You're quite a good mapper and artist despite using alot of RTP assets, it's got a cool vibe to it! I mostly agree with Brancliff however with the negative, aside from the fact NPCs were kinda flat, they were basically paper cutouts of SJWs, it would've been nice if they were actual people instead of one dimensional stereotypes and talking points. It felt very unnatural, like it wasn't a real place. Also it was weird how the MC always brought up wanting to bang your self insert (lol I had trouble with one of my past games being too horny as well.)
Otherwise, I had fun. Good job!