Hey, this is fantastic!! It's always awesome seeing a writing-focused game, especially one with this much heart and care put into it! It reminds me of The Wind in the Willows, a world where there's magic in the mundane and everyone genuinely loves each other. It's a comforting world of childlike wonder and I love it so much!!
The parallax background and the sound design that changes as you scroll around the world really sell the immersive atmosphere. It genuinely feels like your choices have weight, and they actually do! Seeing how every little thing you did affects the characters' journey in the epilogue is such a great payoff, and really makes me want to go back and figure out the best (and worst) choices each character can make... and I totally intend to :D
This is such a cool way of telling a story, and it's amazing you were able to make something with so many secrets and possible outcomes in such a short time! Writing can really spark your imagination in a way visuals alone can't, and you leveraged that to the fullest. I'd love to see more games like this someday!!