You have cool and interesting ideas in here, but I don't think this book is beginner friendly. I would love to see an introduction for new players instead of jumping into the rules with both feet. Otherwise it is a good book.
thank you for the comments. I had put it together for my gaming group, all who have decades if play experience, but I could see how that could be useful for wider audience. I have it written just not edited, so when life allows I will get on it and get it posted.
