I thought the background and graphics were very good looking and the story was engaging and fun, nice job on this game!
There's actually quite a lot going on here and it's even quite long, and interesting and funny throughout - very nice job!
I think it's a pretty long play duration to actually play this all the way through to the end, especially for a jam submission, but I really enjoyed the experience from beginning to end, so great work on it!
I think this game might really benefit from audio and sound effects, but I think it's very difficult to do any of that in such a short time. It may be a hard choice to sacrifice the quality of the game for putting audio and SFX. Or have to somehow make the game in such a way that audio can be put in so easily along with the game, and all at high speed and high quality. Things like that are much easier said than done.
I did like the really interesting dialogue and good humor throughout. I thought you did really well on this game - really nice job!