There's lots of things that indicate that so many cool ideas and polish has gone into making this game! The sound design is fantastic from the garbled dialog to the otherworldly noises used when being chased by enemies. The overlay UI is a cool addition and reinforces the idea that time is a central motif of the game. The concept is original and defies a lot of the tropes that usually go into the jam.
As far as improving the approach, I think a greater degree of environmental storytelling and use of unique props / notes left around to diversify the interior could flesh out the exploration element of the game. The time element could be made more explicit by having multiple objectives, leading players to manage their time. This is definitely a game I see easily being extended further into something brilliant!
Thanks for submitting this game to the SCREAM JAM!
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