The art style is very cute, I love it. I also like the idea of separating the story into 3 acts with a poem, but it feels like it could have been done better. Asides from that, it would have also been nice to have a clearer picture painted of the social landscape of the story at the beginning. The theme for "expansion" is also done subtly within the text itself, with lirself learning to be more compassionate and empathetic. ALSO! One of the first VN's that I've read that have neopronouns!