Hi! Thank you for your criticism! Although this may come off sarcastic I genuinely don't mean it to sound that way- but I will take what you said in consideration for the future and any possible updates. I'm new to the game design industry so comments like yours do push me to do better.
With that being said- I apologize if some of the things in the game came off as cliche. The last ending bit is supposed to come off more as your adult selves reassuring you but I can understand how that is a cliche haha.
May I ask about the part where you say you couldn't even read normally? Can you go more in depth so I know what I can change in the future? And what about it doesn't quite feel personal? Thank you!