It's a very nice concept. I think the the voice acting was well done. Although the floating characters at the center of the screen without legs was weird. Perhaps you could make them bigger and have their cut offs at the bottom of the screen? The main menu track looping is not very clean and lastly the text speed is set to max by default. that leads to it having a lower quality feel than having the nice text building. Great work though! Nice to see some actual jams in this game jam!