This was pretty cute! It was a nice change of pace to get something a little less combat heavy, and I think it had some nice character moments.
The gameplay was a little tedious at times, especially the final dungeon. This took me about 20 minutes to beat, when it easily could have been a 10 minute entry. There were also a LOOOOT of spelling errors, you might do well to write your scripts in a text editor with spell check just to be safe.
The music was great! This David friend of yours is very talented! I would have liked a little more music throughout the game but I understand that in a jam environment like this that's not always doable.
Cute entry!