After the new finish of the first part? Half? Not sure what to call it but it's good there is a decent bit bit of typos in here I'm guessing because of translation errors or coding errors or something. All the characters are fairly well built however I do feel like fleshing out is a bit of an issue across the board. With Kor it makes sense but I just kind of wish there was more fleshing out with all the characters except for Marta and somewhat Zima. Although I could of missed more areas for the opportunity to see more.
Overall pretty good and I'm waiting for the follow up.