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Is this game still in development or is it done?

After the new finish of the first part? Half? Not sure what to call it but it's good there is a decent bit bit of typos in here I'm guessing because of translation errors or coding errors or something. All the characters are fairly well built however I do feel like fleshing out is a bit of an issue across the board. With Kor it makes sense but I just kind of wish there was more fleshing out with all the characters except for Marta and somewhat Zima. Although I could of missed more areas for the opportunity to see more.

Overall pretty good and I'm waiting for the follow up.

I like 1 and 2 for options. 

I have to say.. I've said a few times over the past year/year and a half I've started getting into VNs that I've found some of the best and this DEFINITELY goes into the top 5 all time. The story is wonderful and I have to give you points for the choices actually feeling like they matter as quite a few games while it seems like you have a choice it all leads off to the same path or it's something as simple as Option 1: Be a complete and total dick. Option 2: Be nice. The meta humor in this is so nice so many games with this meta humor just kinda joke it off or something afterwards this game openly breaks the 4th wall and makes it part of the plot point at one point, the humor is just so refreshing overall. Characters are all written great I didn't come across one character that I was like well... you have little to no development or your a 1 sided character with the personality of cardboard. Even some of the lesser focused on characters are fleshed out more than some game's main characters, hell at the end of the game on the final part a new character is introduce and has about a grand total of 15-20 minutes of screen time and you get a good run down on them not many people can do it this well. Also congrats on also making the porn more than just porn but rather a functional plot point instead of just okay this is when you can jerk off now and repeat it as much times as needed during the main story. 

Oh no it's fine it's just something I noticed a lot of. If you could go back and proof read some of that or have someone volunteer to do that, that would be nice. But the game is overall good. 

Great game but I gotta say there just seems to be a lot of spelling errors most are minor but I'd have to go back through the game but there was a few times I had to stop and re-read the page a few times before I finally understood what was meant to be said. 

Big no for me on the NTR and Feet. 

If you want to add optional gay, lesbian, tentacles and BDSM for those who are interested I'm fine with that. 

I like everything else not really much I'd like to add.

So far I really like the game. Especially the story I'm very interested in how that side goes. (I already have some theories but I'll keep em to myself in order to not spoil anything) Only thing I'd ask to be worked on is maybe make travel a little easier than stairs, whatever room you wanted, stairs again, next room so on and so forth as it takes a while to get used to remembering what floor has what so if that was streamlined a little bit I'd like it. Otherwise good game. 

Oh my god this. It's why I don't even want to play down the "Slave route" it's like dude I hope you help out and free them and then get ass fucked in hell for eternity. Like overall the game is good but the mc just makes me want to reach through the screen and hang him from the celling like I have no idea why it's like this. Is it so he has a major "growth" arc at the end or what as it just makes me want to subject him to hell. Dude when I'm playing this bored out of my mind trying to relax so I can fall asleep or something and I just jump up and do a double take at what I just read it's uh telling to say the least. Like I said game overall good, but I've seen more stable mcs in parity games that mock people like who your talking about. Basement dwellers who never leave the gaming chair. 

I've always read books but only in the past year have I gotten into VN's and I've played quite a few good ones but honestly this one moves into the top 5 easily.  At first I was a little hesitant because of lack of updates and people saying there were bugs when I first saw the page so I backed away for a while after trying other VN's I had this pop back into my feed to try so I decided on a whim to download it.  After finally downloading it I loaded into it and I really liked it.  Even though this is just the PROLOGE it is a solid 8-12 hours of play time and I loved most of it. Only issue I ever ran into was during the midnight sex scene with Luna her hair kept clipping in and out of the bed otherwise no bugs I ran into. Only other complaints I can really mention was one the game gets really grindy towards the end but I guess it could of just been how I was playing it.  Also the soundtrack is both good and bad I mean it's generic so meh but one the plus side it's not like other VN's where the music is REALLY good such as the case of Eternium or just god awful like Corrupted Kingdoms (Which while a great game god damn the awful extremely loud generic noises and awful music makes it impossible for me to play with sound.)  But speaking of Corrupted Kingdoms going into it I thought it would be a similar situation as CK and Champion of Realms of two stories very similar with just a handful of different dynamics but no this game stands on it's own two legs just fine and is a strong game that while you can notice some similarities is a strongly different and great story. The only thing I can say is this is a VN with story and focuses Story more than some VN's that focus more on the sex scenes which personally I like cause I like good stories more than good scenes.  So if your looking with a VN with a really good story and good sex scenes if your willing to wait for a while go with this.  If you just want to whack the noodle you got better bets than this, this takes the NOVEL part of Virtual Novel and actually follows it. 

So I waited until 0.5 came out and played it thoroughly before writing this review. I'm going to compare this game directly to the previous game made by Cari Once in a Life Time and also a game I found to be surprisingly similar Lucky's Paradise. WARNING There will be spoilers for all of those games mentioned and this one ahead so don't read farther if you don't want spoilers.

So directly comparing to Once in a Life Time first, this quite a upgrade in every way shape and form. Character development, overarching story, running gags etc. The most improved thing by far is the sound design and music choices that thing is GREAT definitely a few times during the game I stopped to listen to the music or felt off put by it the only downside is a few songs are used repeatedly, (Biggest example being the Twinkle Twinkle little star song from the Original Dead Space ad which while it hit hard the first time I kinda wished there was more than 1 creepy songs for the nightmare style portions.) The only real gripe I'll have is that once again jokes hit REALLY well the first time then just don't hit as well on the second which I mean just kinda happens when you know what's coming.

Comparing this to Lucky's Paradise on the other hand I would say I enjoy the art style, sound design and pacing on this one better. BUT I would say the overall story so far, scariness factor and ability to run multiple plots at once seems to go in Lucky's favor which I know technically has a A Plot in the Elections/Mayor with Maxy and her "alter", Sasha, Layla and Liz. Then you have the side plot of the Charpenters with Charlotte and her Sister as well as Mr. Nam and then you have the plot of the Yorokoshi with Yui, the Red and Blue Dragon's and Yuki. 3 Really well put together A, B and C plots that all kinda mesh into one. I would say if you like this I would STRONGLY recommend checking out Lucky's Paradise if your fine with the less linear more choose your own story pace style of VN's. 

In the end both are good but not finished yet I would probably write a final review for both when they are done but as of right now both are really good VN's I would recommend.

I actually was able to get it to work through google finally I just had to run a VPN and it let me install it on the first go so it's all good.

Hasn't worked for me. I've waited for a week+ at a time at some points and it still keeps coming up with the same messages for both it says I can download the patch from v15 to v16 through google but I can't download the full game.

I can't get the install started on my laptop every time I try to Google says it has been downloaded or attempted to be downloaded to much and mega says I've overused my free download trial limit (Despite me trying other games and getting them to install through mega just fine) anyone got any ideas?

Honestly one of the best VNs I've ever played for sure in my top 3. I just have 2 issues with it. The one that bothers me the most is pacing, it's a great game don't get me wrong but even without using skip you should be able to do the story in 7 hours max if you manage to try to keep every single possible path. I just wish there was another hour or two set for world building (Some spoilers ahead) like why is it always Asmosdus who turns traitor, (Or almost always) How are the 5 children picked, if they have major connections world wide now that the main villain is gone is there anyone else with similar powers as you that can challenge you, if you have the immortal soul will you also jump around between bodies after death or can you whittle it down till it eventually vanishes with each generation and so on. The only other issue I have with it is despite being set up to get multiple possible endings the humor just isn't as good on repeat like my first play through it was awesome a time or two I was in tears from laughing so hard but the next 2 or 3 times the same jokes might of got a chuckle but that's it, it's really good content the first time when it just completely shocks you and catches you off guard but when you expect it not as funny. Overall a really good VN I see the author decided on a new one first and I hope it's really good but I wished they would of expanded on this one or made a sequel first before moving to the next project.