This was a DNF for me.
I won't rehash what others have said because I agree with most of it.
I can tell you were using this game as a learning tool and that's fantastic! I can also tell you had no idea where to start with making RPGmaker games, so I'll give you a starting strategy: Make a character you like, watch RPG maker videos on youtube, practice RPG maker with that character and have FUN!
A character you can have FUN with will always make you want to give that character a more interesting world to explore, and more interesting fights.
A character you love and gives you fun will fuel you and your creativity while you are learning how to make mechanics and balance things.
I hope that helps!
I want to see your next project for sure! I'd love to see how you grow from here. ^_^