I love the cat model. I'm not sure why but super kawaii... Anywho.. Is the cat going to match the interesting aesthetic of the background art? As someone said, it does seem very tutorialish from a youtube video. The text for distance, etc isn't really necessary. If it is meant to be like a lot of 3rd person games that say "press space to jump", etc when you are doing initial part of game, then yea it would make sense. Otherwise, good start!