Overall, pretty solid!
Could have almost left out the interactive battles and made them into cinematics, since there wasn't a lot of mechanical depth, but it was at least very interesting and the presentation was great.
I discovered some sort of cheat/test room behind the king where all the collisions were broken. I thought I'd found a secret at first haha.
Other than one small-ish punctuation error and a couple text boxes that ran out of room, the writing and polish were on the stronger side.