Overall: I loved the look of everything.
Gameplay: I got tired of the popup fights very quickly and spammed the enter key for a while, then I just started escaping everything. And then I stopped playing because I couldn't get more than five spaces without having to do that all over again. Sadly,the fights, which look like they took you the most time to set up, turned this quickly into a DNF.
Music: I turned it down. Way down. Make of that what you will.
Story: It definitely felt like a self insert fanfic, which is fine.
Graphics: One of the best looking games of the whole jam. I think the girls were drawn with a little too much fan service, but everything else was very nice.
Comedy: It never felt funny.
If the fights hadn't interrupted me so much, and if the characters had less to fight with at the beginning I would have played a lot more of this game.