thank you! most of the story and pacing bits are unfortunately missing because i had no time to write upon them, but now that they're setup we'll be working on redoing most part of the middle of the script, making the choices way different + adding 5 extra days to the story as a huge update to complete it and tie every knot together. i also had to calm myself down on the writing since the original draft i had written was as grim as the stakes, but i went back on them for jam rule purposes which resulted in the rushed one we have now. still, thanks for the feedback on the story! i appreciate it!