AGHHHHH this was so good!!!! This story went in so many different ways I wasn't expecting, yet I fuck with every single one of them. You've already read some of my thoughts as I played but this really is something special, and I would love love a continuation.
Lea is so sopping wet and pathetic, I love how you never shied away from showing her fucking up, even when it was a matter of life and death, especially with the whole Vivi thing. That hurt. And it made me angry at Lea, which is something writer usually tell you not to do with your protagonist, but I'm so glad you did. I love her and I'm scared to see what'll happen to her.
On that note, I also love all of her teammates, even Ark despite her attitude. Or because of her attitude. I hope we get to know them more sometime in the future.
Also god, fuck Kai. Fuck Kai from the very moment he appeared. You have no idea how my heart sank with that final scene, I need Ark to drive that sword through his forehead right now D:
Also the art for the sprites and the character designs is very nice and cute, and the writing is perfect at being comedic or very hurtful when it needs to. I had such a good time reading this. I can't wait to see if there's more in the future.