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I can see the idea of your game, and I like the designs of some of the npcs and the design of Bristle himself, but there are several issues that I think need to be looked into. 

Some things I would recommend:

Npcs: The first I saw upon starting up the game was a png rocket clipping into the ground (Refer to image). There's also a realistic looking dog floating in midair. While I do like the designs of the wolf and deer, they seem to be cropped out and the wolf is also floating in midair. Are some of these placeholders? I'm asking because some of these just feel out of place and put in at the last minute.  

Combat: I think the combat needs to be reworked or at least better explained. I have to agree with Me_gan that you need to list the controls somewhere, or at least have one of npcs explain how combat works. I was also confused about the controls, as the pressing left mouse just made Bristle do what looked like a block animation and then a vertical slice after clicking left mouse a few times. I could also only defeat the venus fly trap enemies, while the ants were just impossible to kill. 

I would also suggest adding a reset button, as there were times I fell off the map and got stuck running in place. 

I don't me to be critical, as I can see that you have quite a lot of passion for this game. I love your concept and some of the models you've made are amazing. I just know that you could do better, and there's a lot that needs to be done by the next sprint. Either way, I look forward to seeing how your game develops from here.