The only thing I see wrong is in the description. If Roxy is Mia's daughter. That would make Roxy your cousin, not your childhood friend. I like futa. Also, if you're going to add mini-games. Will the player be able to skip them? Not alot of people will be able to play depending on the games you add. A lot of Devs make that mistake especially if the players are handicapped. For example, those who are partially blind like me.