Hello. This was a interesting game for sure.
Spoilers.
Going to be real here I didnt think anything of this game the first time I looked at it and lets just say that I was a lillte correct there. I get that the style is because of the crayons from the story but even then it doesnt make it look good. Anywho I always say that a good story can make up for a bad art style. The story was one of the better things here. though even that could use some work. Dont get me wrong the story was decent but the way you tried telling it was a bit jaring. Having drawings underwater was just a bit odd. The character dialogue was a bit strange. Every time a character meets a new character it alkways started with hi and hi. Thats fine in real life but for a story that can be a bit wierd. Do have to say that i can see that you have put in some everts. But even so the decent story cant really save it.
Final thoughts is that this could be so much more. Just work on your dialogue and drawing skills and then I think you can make a good game because I can see that you do know how to make a story. So keep it up and hope to see you around.