i have to agree the game is a hot mess the story writing has issues in many places the voice acting is just dead lacking any kind of emotions it ruins the vibe because its just makes me laugh and i would have never imagine to someone actually use the line of " you have taken me so well" WTF??? its a nice idea but its just a flop
Yea, a lot of the game is all over the place!
I initially worked on the game as a way to learn making visual novels, so the story was not at all planned out. The voice acting was rushed and pretty sloppy, and overall not great. I'm making a lot of improvements to the story with each update, I've even rewritten and redone the entire beginning introduction of the game for the next update. The newer content is also far better written than the early stuff. Hope you can come back to the game in the future and give it another look :)