This is a really nice submission, loved your instrumentation choices! Each track feels like they could fit to where you described they would go. Track 9's build up and release is great too, probably my favourite in the whole soundtrack, and 10 using that alarm sound to show it was a dream was a nice touch too.
Not super related but if you weren't planning on keeping strictly to Japanese instruments I'd recommend replacing some of the tracks strings/ woodwinds with either and erhu or dizi, really expressive instruments that'd fit perfectly in this kind of soundtrack